—COME ON, BABY, THIS LAUGH’S ON ME

 

 

https://fictivedream.com/2023/02/02/solstice-twisting/

 

 

This is exquisite. A song with all the right notes. Love, love, love this, Len.

 

Beautiful.

 

Brilliant, as always, Len.

 

Loved reading this glorious naked trip!

 

Brilliant story!

 

I love this one!

 

Gorgeous imagery.

 

Some of these lines cut—they are so sharp.

 

Loved it over on Twitter. Loving it here some more!

 

Love the metaphors!

Beautifully poetic.